Modify the sentence I add points for the right one .

1.Summer vacation is approaching, and students are about to end their 6 years of primary school life.

2.Today's labor is the most enjoyable.

3.There are many good people in the school.

4.Increase Change to Improve.

5.Bad to remove.

6.China has the Great Wall of China, which is unique in the world.

7.On June 21st this year, our final exam for the Primary School will be held.

8.He was beaten and reviled today.

9.He has a lot of strength and can carry a 50-pound bag.

10.Small boy and girl classmates.

11.China has independently developed an artificial earth satellite.

12.Electronic computers are developing rapidly, and a new generation of computers is being created every decade.

13.Did you watch last night's children's show?

1.Summer vacation is coming, and the students have ended six years of primary school life.

2.Today's labor is the most enjoyable.

3.There are many good people in the school.

4.We need to improve our learning methods and improve our learning efficiency.

5.Spitting is a bad habit.

6.There is a Great Wall in our country.

7.On June 21st, we will hold our Primary Level exams.

8.He was beaten and scolded.

9.He has a lot of strength and can carry a pack of fifteen pounds.

10.Labor began, the big male classmates rushed to plant the seeds, and the small men and the female classmates did light work.

11.Earth satellites made by our own China.

12.Electronic computers are developing rapidly, and a new generation of computers is being created every decade.

13.I said to Xiao Gang, "Did you watch the children's show last night?" ”

Modify the 12 mantras of the sick sentence:

Formula 1: No one says how to stare at the grinding shed, and it is easy to do it with Xiao Ming!

Formula 2: Words are repeated and have language problems, and you are happy to remove one. (The repetition of the common test is imminent and final, unbearable and forbidden, almost and all, vernier very and ten, often and sometimes, determined and probably).

Mantra 3: Level improvement is a partner, ** increase and decrease. Property must be protected, content should be enriched, and quality can only be improved or decreased. Habits should be formed, trees should sprout, patience should be taught, traditions should be carried forward, and attitudes should be corrected.

Formula 4: Words should be added after and, and they should be reversed before and after.

Mantra 5: See the word "make" to be removed.

Formula 6: Sure enough, if you transform, collusion changes and becomes united. Boasting is not right is a compliment, violent is not right is intense, concentrated correction and gathering, teeth and claws are too terrible, and the hands and feet are beautiful.

Formula 7: Two of them he or she don't know, tell one of them their names.

Formula 8: The teacher has won the title, and I will take the title off.

Formula 9: Memories can't be about the past.

Mantra 10: First place Kai then the season.

Mantra 11: It is estimated (probably) to be an angel, it must be (concluded) to be a devil, remove the devil and world peace.

Mantra 12: Determine that it is an angel, probably a devil, remove the devil and world peace.

How interesting the ancients described rural life.

Recently, the school has carried out activities to give love to the disaster area.

Spring in Wuhan is a fascinating season.

If the answer is satisfactory, I have to complete the task weekend, thanks.

It should read: 1Carrying out "ideal education" activities can make students' learning goals clearer.

2.This social work made him enjoy volunteer activities even more.

3.In this collective, there are many Lei Feng-like characters.

4.As I was walking to school, I saw green leaves growing from a small tree on the side of the road.

5.When foreign friends came to Fushun, they were warmly welcomed by the people of Fushun.

6.In this article, the author praises the spirit of solidarity and mutual assistance.

7.From the day he started school, he had a keen interest in mathematics.

8.The problem of environmental pollution should arouse the concern of the whole society.

9.When the wind blows through the wheat field, the wheat field rises and falls.

10.This review process reflects a big problem.

Modified:

1.Carrying out "ideal education" activities can make students' learning goals clearer. ("Pass" and "Make" can only be left alone).

2.Through this social work, he enjoyed volunteer activities even more. ("Pass" and "Make" can only be left alone).

3.In this collective, there are many advanced figures like Lei Feng.

4.When I was walking to school, I saw green leaves growing from a small tree on the side of the road5When foreign friends came to Fushun, they were warmly welcomed by the people of Fushun.

6.In this article, the author celebrates the spirit of solidarity and mutual assistance.

7.Ever since he started school, he has had a keen interest in mathematics.

8.Environmental pollution should arouse the concern of the whole society.

9.When the wind blows through the wheat field, the wheat field rises and falls. Or: The wind blows, and the wheat field rises and falls10During this review process, a big problem was discovered.

1.Pass. So that manifest error can be deleted from one of them.

2.Such as 13Delete the word 'in'

4.While. Repeat with 'time' and delete one of them.

5.Such as 46Delete the semantic repetition of 'in' e.g. 3

7.Delete the words 'from that day'

8.Delete the preposition 'for'

9.Semantic incompleteness What ups and downs make up the 'wheat'

10.'This paragraph' is duplicated with 'process' and one of them is deleted.

1. Remove the word "passed".

2. Same as 13, remove the word "advanced".

4. Add "has" or "already" before "grown".

5. Remove "when" and "when".

6. Remove the word "author".

7. Remove "self".

8. Replace "environmental pollution" with "environmental protection".

9. Add "wheat" before "up and down".

10. Remove "this paragraph".

1.Carry out "ideal education" activities to make students' learning goals clearer.

2.Through this social work, he enjoyed volunteer activities even more.

3.In this collective, there are many advanced figures like Lei Feng.

4.As I was walking to school, I saw green leaves growing from a small tree on the side of the road.

5.When foreign friends came to Fushun, they were warmly welcomed by the people of Fushun.

6.In this article, the author praises the spirit of solidarity and mutual assistance.

7.He has had a keen interest in mathematics since the day he went to school.

8.The problem of environmental pollution should arouse the concern of the whole society.

9.When the wind blows through the wheat field, the wheat seedlings rise and fall.

10.During this revision process, students reflect a big problem.

The ninth 9When the wind blows through the wheat field, it rises and falls.

Replace it with "When the wind blows through the field, the wheat rises and falls." ”

I will only this, sorry

A common grammatical flaw in these sentences is that there is no subject. You can add an appropriate subject to the sentence that follows. For example, the 7th can be changed to "He has had a strong interest in mathematics since the day he went to school".